Preliminary Task

This is our preliminary task.

FINAL CUT POLLY BUTTON

Video criteria

- Holding a shot steady where appropriate
- Framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate
- Using a variety of shot distances
- Shooting material appropriate to the task set
- Selecting mise en scene, including colour, lighting, objects and setting
- Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer
- Using titles appropriately

Feedback from class

Mise en Scene:
- College toilets, McFly and the ipod show the age group
- Hair spray, sunglasses and make up shows genre

Camerawork:
- Close up
- Over the shoulder, reflection in the mirror
- Crane shot
- Match on action
- Close up of eyes is a bit strange

Editing:
- Like the names, good font and positioning
- Jake and James jump from front of the car to standing further forwards with a girl?
- Good use of slow motion, hair flick fits well

Sound:
- McFly song says says 22 seconds on ipod but plays from the beginning in the film opening
- Need to edit out voice-diegetic
- Good sound over eyes
- Giggling may work in some places throughout

Generic Conventions:
- Teenage romantic comedy
- Typical colours
- Ipod
- Make up
- Girl falls over, comedy

Rough cut

this is our rough cut for our film opening. Enjoy.

Our Animatic Opening Sequence

We chose the first bit of music to represent Polly because she thinks she is cool, and the music had a young beat.

We made the song by McFly sound more tinned and hollow, this made is sound more that she was listening to her I Pod. We think it was very effective, and made it sound more diegetic.

We have change the name of Chad-Michael Efron to Chad Chapman.

COSTUMES

The two main characters in our opening sequence are the boy and the girl.

The girl will be wearing:

• lots of jewelery

• big sunglasses
• handbag
• scarf

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The boy will be wearing:

• shoulder bag

• shirt

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PROP LIST

Big sunglasses
We need a pair of sunglasses for when the main characters first walks through the doors of the corridor.

I Pod
She will be listening to her music as she walks through the school.


















Big Handbag
















Hairbrush

Shot list

Shot 1: Establishing shot
Girl walks down busy corridor
Props: handbag
Location: Corridor

Shot 2: Freeze frame and close up
Introduction of who she is. She immediately slips over.
"hi, i'm [girl's name], and i'm cool, calm and sophisticated."

Shot 3: Long shot/Slow-motion/freeze frame
"Perfect" boy walks in, close up on his face as he flicks his hair (slow motion)
Freeze frame of him smiling as the girl introduces him to the audience.

Shot 4: Close up
Flicks between their eyes (shot-reverse-shot)
Girl squeals and runs into the bathroom

Shot 5: mid-shot
Looking through bathroom mirror, starts putting on make up. She then puts her earphones in (match on action)
Props: Make up, Hairbrush, earphones
Location: Bathroom

Shot 6: close up
(match on action)
Side view of her ear, and her putting her earphones in
Props: earphones

Shot 7: close up
close up of her ipod, of her selecting a song. (McFly - 5 colours in her hair)
McFly starts to play
Props: Ipod

Shot 8: mid-shot and close ups
various different shots of parts of her body starting to dance

Shot 9: mid shot
girl goes to leave bathroom, she is still dancing.
(match on action)

Shot 10: Long shot
(match on action)
girl dancing out of the door and down the path

Shot 11: over-the-shoulder
over the "perfect" boys shoulder.
you can see the girl turning round and realising he has seen her.

Shot 12: close up
switches between boy laughing and the girl cringing
(shot-reverse-shot)

Shot 13: mid shot
The girl spins around quickly to hide in the loos and get away from the boy.
She runs and hits the door and falls over.

Shot 14: birds eye view
girl lying on her back on the floor looking up into the camera.
Her bag and all her things are all over the floor around her.
This is where the title of the film would be shown.
Props: Handbag, Makeup, School books etc.

ideas for stereotypical female characters

main girl:
- over the top clothes and accessories
- clumsy, exaggerated facial expressions

ideas for stereotypical male characters

"perfect" boy:
- sweepy long hair
- nice smile

initial ideas

here are the initial ideas for the basis of our opening film sequence:

- setting and location: college grounds (corridor with lockers, toilets, outside etc)
- costume: bright, colorful clothes, big sunglasses, handbag, massive earrings
- props: ipod, lockers, earphones and big handbag

initial ideas:
- establishing shot of stereotypical girl walking down school corridor by herself, as she walks, she slips over suddenly.
- establishing shot of 'perfect' boy and a slow motion shot of him smiling.
- close up of each of their eyes noticing each other.
- girl runs into bathroom, puts on ipod, and begins to dance while putting makeup on.
- girl carries on dancing, and exits the toilet. gets too carried away with dancing and doesn't realise the 'perfect' boy has walked out of the boy's loos and stopped to watch her.
- she spins around, realises he's watching her, gasps, turns and runs straight into the toilet door and slips onto her back.


this is a vague outline of what we wish to happen within our opening film sequence- it may be altered during the filming process.

film analysis

Romeo and Juliet - directed by Baz Luhrman

I think the opening sequence of Luhrman's Romeo and Juliet is extremely effective, especially as it manages to inform the audience of the background information and history of the family rivalry between the Montagues and Capulets, without giving too much away. The first stanza of Romeo and Juliet, ("Two Households, Both Alike In Dignity...") is presented through the idea of a news reporter on a TV screen. It starts off as a long shot and slowly zooms in so you are right there within the action of the play. The "Two Households" stanza is then repeated as a voice-over, creating an extremely dramatic effect, over loads of camera footage involving Verona, the two families fighting and their individual histories. Special effects were used to speed up the footage, and with that and loud, classical music, it looks like a news report. Baz Luhrman also introduces the main characters with editing their name and who they are on top of a frozen image of them, I think this was a really good idea as it creates a basic understanding of the people involved in the family fued. The setting of the opening sequence is all around Verona, and the mise-en-scene of the news report footage is very particular, and gives the film a sense of timeless-ness (as the mixutre


NOT FINISHED

the deadlines

Coursework:

Interim deadlines - practical, rough cut, 9th February (last lesson)
- Writing, 9:00am 9th March to Moodle.

Final Deadline - Practical, final cut, end of first lesson 2nd March
- Writing, 9:00am, 16th march to moodle.

More Romantic Comedy research

This is the wikipedia definition of a romantic comedy. This helped us gain further insight to what it exactly means, and what we have to do to achieve a typical romantic comedy.

The basic plot of a romantic comedy is that two protagonists, usually a man and a woman, meet, part ways due to an argument or other contrived obstacle, then ultimately reunite. Sometimes the two protagonists meet and become involved initially, then must confront challenges to their union. Sometimes the two protagonists are hesitant to become romantically involved because they believe that they do not like each other, because one of them already has a partner, or because of social pressures. However, the screenwriters leave clues that suggest that the characters are, in fact, attracted to each other and that they would be a good love match. The protagonists often separate or seek time apart to sort out their feelings or deal with the external obstacles to their being together.

While the two protagonists are separated, one or both of them usually realizes that they are ideal for each other, or that they are in love with each other. Then, after one of the two makes some spectacular effort to find the other person and declare their love, (this is sometimes called the grand gesture), or due to an astonishing coincidental encounter, the two meet again. Then, perhaps with some comic friction or awkwardness, they declare their love for each other and the film ends happily. The couple does not, however, have to marry, or live together "happily ever after." The ending of a romantic comedy is meant to affirm the primary importance of the love relationship in its protagonists' lives, even if they physically separate in the end (e.g. Shakespeare in Love, Roman Holiday)^[1].

There are many variations on this basic plotline. Sometimes, instead of the two lead characters ending up in each other's arms, another love match will be made between one of the principal characters and a secondary character (e.g., My Best Friend's Wedding and My Super Ex-Girlfriend). Alternatively, the film may be a rumination on the impossibility of love, as in Woody Allen's film Annie Hall. The basic format of a romantic comedy film can be found in much earlier sources, such as Shakespeare plays like Much Ado About Nothing and A Midsummer Night's Dream.

Some comedy films, such as Knocked Up, combine themes of romantic comedies and stoner comedies, creating a subgenre that appeals to both men and women.

discussion of all five genres

supernatural thriller with a strong female lead - thrillers are characterized by fast pacing, frequent action, and resourceful heroes who must thwart the plans of the more powerful villains. literary devices such as suspense, red herrings and cliff hangers are normally used.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=Vm4Fw2QElA4
What Lies Beneath

british social realist drama - kitchen sink drama. real life issues and scenarios dramatized into a programme.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=SfoJx6t97RE
This Is England

adventure story for younger audiences - adventure stories normally include a quest or journey to find something or someone in a race against the competition. usually the main character meets lots of different people/characters along the way.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=lhQ-0HGn8mI
Madagascar 2 - Escape To Africa boyyyy

teenage romantic comedy - stereotypically includes a young teenage girl trying to fit in/make a certain boy like her and messes everything up in a humorous way.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=zx-Um3L2S3g
Angus, Thongs & Perfect Snogging

crime caper with an ensemble cast - a group of people trying to commit a crime eg. robbing a bank.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=BV-U-ERRU_A
Oceans Eleven

Influence and Ideas

We looked at the Juno opening sequence and liked the idea of the sketchy/cartoon motion.

http://www.shadowplaystudio.com/juno/index.html

We attempted our own version of this sequence. We used the posterisation effect on final cut. This is how it turned out...

This is our production company logo for Midnight productions.

To create this we used:
- Photo shop
- Final Cut
- Garage Band

We decided to use this specific music because it represents
the process of time moving which goes well with the movement
of the celestial bodies used.