Feedback from class

Mise en Scene:
- College toilets, McFly and the ipod show the age group
- Hair spray, sunglasses and make up shows genre

Camerawork:
- Close up
- Over the shoulder, reflection in the mirror
- Crane shot
- Match on action
- Close up of eyes is a bit strange

Editing:
- Like the names, good font and positioning
- Jake and James jump from front of the car to standing further forwards with a girl?
- Good use of slow motion, hair flick fits well

Sound:
- McFly song says says 22 seconds on ipod but plays from the beginning in the film opening
- Need to edit out voice-diegetic
- Good sound over eyes
- Giggling may work in some places throughout

Generic Conventions:
- Teenage romantic comedy
- Typical colours
- Ipod
- Make up
- Girl falls over, comedy